Sunday, July 29, 2018

Night Shadows drawings

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It's been awhile since I've had any drawings to post. So lucky me, I finally have some more to post. Actually, I finished these drawings a couple of weeks ago.

These drawings are all from the book "Night Shadows."

Name: Alan Field
Fairy Tale Character: Beast
Alan is a Catholic cabbie from London in the 1840s.

Arabella Warren
Fairy Tale character: Cinderella, Rapunzel, granny from Little Red Riding Hood
Arabella is Alan's stepsister and often called Bella. After her mother remarried, she had to go work in a thread factory.

Captain Edwin Aldermaston
Fairy Tale Character: Wolf, Gaston, villain
Captain Edwin is the selfish villain of the book. He wanted to marry Sophia Gray and attempted to poison Alan, because she favored him.

Richard Hamilton
Fairy Tale character: Prince Charming, Hunter
Richard is a Catholic aristocratic who was originally from France. He met Arabella at a party and became interested in her.

Sophia Gray
Fairy Tale Character: Belle, Fairy Godmother, Snow White
Sophia is the governess for the small daughter of an Earl. She met Alan when he saved her life.

Cover art

Effie.
Fairy Tale Character: Little Match Girl, Red Riding Hood
Effie first joined the story when she almost got run over by a carriage and Alan saved hers and Sophia's lives.

It's kind of hard to tell in the book, but I had all these fairy tale characters covered somewhere in the book, even if it was only a very tiny bit.

~The Author

Sunday, July 22, 2018

From bad to good

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Recently I was looking at someone's blog, and she did a neat post on redemption arcs in characters Here. I decided to do something similar except use my own characters.

Evan from Frozen nonfanfiction sequel "Burnt."

Well, not exactly a villain Evan does start the story out with thoughts of revenge and bitterness. But as the story progresses he eventually helps to do what is right, even at the cost of his own life. But don't worry he doesn't die, I liked him to much.

Wolfgang Drew from "The Night Thief."

Wolfgang goes from someone who is determined to get what he thinks is his to the point of breaking into people's houses to working with the police.

Expecto from "The Red Lion."

Expecto, as the adopted son of a king doesn't have any hope of getting the throne, not with his foster father's real son living. Angry, bitter and determined to take the throne from someone who couldn't care less about it, Expecto steals the prized Starsole in the attempt to conquer his foster father's kingdom for his own. But over the course of the second book "The Red Lion: The King's Assassin," Expecto changes to the point of giving his life for the very people he recently betrayed.

Kelsie from the "Apprentice Warriors."

While not exactly an evil person, Kelsie sided with evil for a brief time, because she discovered that her father was evil and sided with him. She honestly believed that she had to be evil because her father was. But then she returned to the good side because she strongly believed in what was right.

Morgan LaFay from "The Pendragon Saga."

A bitter and unhappy woman, Morgan sided with LaFay in the attempt to wipe out the Pendragons and seize the throne of Camelot. Morgan eventually realized that LaFay was simply using her to revenge himself on his half brother. Morgan joined the Pendragon's side to punish him. But eventually she came to believe in their cause and gave her life for it.

Mordred LaFay from "The Pendragon Saga."

Like his mother Mordred was driven by selfish reasons. But he also truly believed that he was in the right and Arthur was in the wrong. But as the series progresses and Mordred fully sides with evil, he gets his moment of redemption, but Arthur is the one that will pay for it with his own blood.

James from the "Prince Charming Diaries."

I believe that this is a very common figure in this circle. The Beast from "Beauty and the Beast." James like all retellings of the beast, is a selfish vain character. He does make the customary circle and become a better man.

I probably have more, but these were the only ones I had drawings for.

~The Author

Saturday, July 21, 2018

Character Interview: Buck

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Prince Francis Andrew Daniel Stephen Joseph Peter Meldrum

Me: Good morning your highness.
Buck: Please call me Buck.
Me: Why is your name so long?
Buck: Um- to be honest nobody calls me that. Some people do call me Francis though.
Me: Do they ever call you Prince Francis?
Buck: No. I'm a king now anyway.
Me: Oh that's right.
Buck: You made everyone in my kingdom incompetent morons.
Me: Woah. Why are you so bitter?
Buck: Because your made this really really random princess appear out of nowhere suddenly and challenge my right to the throne.
Me: But you did not want the throne.
Buck: Why kind of excuse is that?
Me: You're supposed to be nice and calm and dumb and-
Buck: Ouch!
Me: Do you plan on rescuing Christina and Dan from the pirates?
Buck: Don't even get me started  having these really really random people attack the kingdom for no reason  I could rescue them, but no.on that!
Me: Why not?
Buck: If you wouldn't keep having these really random people attack my kingdom for no reason, I could rescue them.
Me: They're pirates. They want booty.
Buck: My kingdom is run by farmers, fishermen and rangers! What possibly could pirates want? They could go to the Mainland and get actual treasure.
Me: Oh right, I didn't give you a lot of money. Hmm.. I wonder what the main source of wealth is in Nimrode.
Buck: You know, you gave me a lot of loyal friends, right?
Me: Um- yeah. I'm glad you're happy.
Buck: *shouts* KIF? HANSEL?
Me: *nervously* I should be going.
Buck: *sweetly* Wait just a minute.

Hansel

and

Kif
(Whom I apparently don't have a drawing of)
enter.

Buck: Can you get rid of this girl?
Me: Just leaving! *Makes a run for the door*
Hansel: *Sets an arrow to the string of his bow* Shall I send her a goodbye message!
Kif: You can't shoot a lady. Just throw her in prison!
Buck: She's the author!
Kif: Nevermind, just shoot her!


Buck and three friends.
Narik the Flagrin Raider, Dan the Ranger's Apprentice, and Christina.

Buck

Buck drawn by my sister Eleanor

God Bless You All,
~the Author

Sunday, July 8, 2018

DoFP Part 4, Yaron's Diary


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Gray Time Day 2
One never knows what they have until it is gone. By staying on Graystark Island, I pushed my luck. I should have flown back to the Desolate Island as soon as I realized how to fly the trunk. That would have been the most honorable thing. I promised to return for the Enchantress Eleth, but I broke my promise. Now I am trapped in a cold cell. At least I am not starving. There was a chipped pot full of water and a hunk of moldy bread, on a bench in the cell. A feast fit for a prince, if he is hungry enough.

Gray Time Day 3
I awoke with stomach pains. I knew that there had to be a downside to eating moldy bread. I was groveling on the floor, when that wretched Eldark came to spew his empty threats on me. Could he not see that I was suffering enough?
Do you know what my person does to trespassers?” he growled. I thought long on this subject. I really would have liked to guess right.
Wine and dine them on cream and the fatted calf?” I guessed. It seemed reasonable.
Wrong!” he bellowed, “I slice there heads off and catapult it into the Divide! Then I hang the body up on the wall to scare any further intruders away.” I gulped and touched my neck. It liked being attached to my head.
Do you know what my father does to people who cut off his sons' heads?” I asked stiffly.
Nothing!” he jeered. He was a remarkably good guesser.
He lays ruins to their homes and families!” I bluffed.
I will look foreword to confronting him!” Aldark retorted and walked off. I must say things could have gone a lot better.

Gray Time, Day 7
Alia finally found me. The tower is not exactly that big, I am surprised she did not find me sooner.
I thought you had gone back to the skys.” she said in surprise.
Your father cut off my freedom!” I grumbled, she drew near and gripped the bars of the cell.
What is freedom?” she asked.
When you have choice.” I said bitterly, “To make the right decision!”
You mean I have the ch- um- freedom to let you out of that cell?” she asked.
You get the main idea.” I said.
Oh I could not let you go!” Alia cried, “My father would be so angry.”
See you have no freedom!” I yelled and kicked the door so hard my foot tingled. She fled. I felt guilty for losing my temper.

Gray Time Day 9
I waited all day yesterday for Alia to come back, so I could apologize, but she never did. It was a bitter night. Today I went around the whole room kicking the wall to vent my frustration on something. And what should happen. but a secret door opened up in the wall. It was a foot tall and two feet wide. I got down on my belly and wiggled through. I nearly had a heart attack when the door shut and trapped me in that black tunnel. So there was nothing to do but go on. The air got stuffy and I kept tasting soot in my mouth. But eventually I came to an opening. There was a twenty foot drop to a stone floor. A stiff straight back chair and a desk was the only furniture. I panicked. How was I going to get out of the hole? Presently a door opened and Aldark came in. As he passed under me I dropped. I swear it was an accident. I crashed into him and the two of us went down in a heap.
What on Graystark?” he yelled. I scrambled to my feet and made a beeline for the door.
You infernal wretch!” Aldark yelled, “Get out of my tower!” I would have been happy to oblige, only I didn't know where the door or my trunk was.

Gray Time Day 10
Salt kept me eating and drinking the best food in the tower. She also provided me a secret cubby with very comfortable cushions. It was wonderful. Or it would have been. But Alia was ignoring me. I tried to follow her one day, but she hid. It was almost dark when I finally cornered her against a wall. I was determined to find out what was wrong.
Let me go!” she cried. Then I noticed one of her eyes was swelling shut.
What happened to you?” I cried in a rage, “Who did that?” I was ready to kill the offender.
My father punished me for talking to you, please leave.” she whispered. I felt sick. She was sending me away, but even worse that lout had dared to strike her.
I will kill him-” I began my face livid.
Just go!” she said. So I went.

Gray Time Day 20
I have gone through Greengrove, Sha, and many cities on Kildimere, telling stories and storing my vast wealth in banks. Of course I avoided Kalor and soldiers. I no longer had an stories left about my own family. So I started recounting tales of my off worlder cousins. Mother's brother, Won had some real ridiculous narratives to share about them. My cousins are children of father's sisters. I dragged the stories out a bit to make them more interesting. My most famous story was called “Cinderella and the glass slipper.” Other favorites, included, “The Girl and the Beast,” “The sleeping princess, the fairy and the stumbling prince” “The Frog Hero” Rapunzel of the long Braids” “The girl with the Snow White skin” “The Pea Test” and “The Princess and the Seven Swans” All of them were really outlandish. I of course do not believe that any of the events in the stories ever happened. Won is such a liar. But his wife is worse. I mean so much worse. She has a strange name too. Blanche. But I will spare you the details. Off worlders are very strange. I found the more stories I told or researched in old book halls, the less time I had to think of Alia. If only I could forget her. She had made it clear that she did not want me to come back.

Gray Time Day 25
Today I was in the middle of telling a story about two brothers who both swore to die for the other. The younger brother kept his promise and came back to switch places with his unfortunate brother. Suddenly I stopped. The old hero of this old tale had kept faith in exchange for his life, but I had failed to rescue an Enchantress after promising to do so. If I ever wanted to be worthy of Alia, I should start by keeping my promise to Eleth. I finished the story with less enthusiasm then when I began. I would have to take my earnings to the bank. Then tomorrow I would head back to the Desolate Island.

Gray Time Day 26
My affairs are in order. My room at the Inn paid, I am prepared to go back to Desolate Island. I am not sure why I avoided this task for so long.

Gray Time Day 27
I climbed out of the trunk, not onto the hot sand of Desolate Island but onto the cold stone floor of Alia's tower.
What?” I yelled, “How can I keep my promise if you bring me to the wrong place, you stupid trunk!” the lid dropped closed on my hand. “OW!” I yelled. Salt came running up the stairs in surprise.
Mistress Alia, come quick!” she cried, “Master Yaron has returned!” Alia did come. Her long black hair flowing like a river down her back and sparkling with gold and silver string. Her dress was made of a beautiful filmy white cloth over a silver background. She looked like a star.
Yaron, why did you come back?” she asked as she directed a piercing look on me. Her eyes were like two chips of blue ice.
Madame.” I said with an elegant bow, or as elegant as it could be with my hand still clamped between the lid and box of the trunk. “I am a renowned story teller.” I continued, “I have come to share my finest with you as a gift for your kindness.” Alia sat down on a chair and crossed her arms.
Tell me the story of a girl in a tower.” she ordered. Without even blinking I told her the story of “Rapunzel of the Long Braids” I stressed all the parts with the cowardly hero, as he was very funny. Both Salt and Alia were laughing by the time I finished. Grinning in triumph, I climbed back into the trunk.
Farewell Ladies, I shall return another time.” I said gallantly and closed the lid. I do not know if they protested or not. I did not feel up to another farewell.

Gray Time Day 28
This morning I burst out of the trunk and into the fresh air, to find myself still on top of the tower. I could hardly believe my eyes.
You have got to be joking!” I gasped.
Why are you back, you impudent boy?” a voice boomed. My hair stood up on end and I turned to face Aldark. I opened my mouth, but nothing came out. He shot out one arm and grabbed me by the neck. I clutched at his hand. He was trying to kill me. It was time to employ some real soldier experience. I lifted my leg and kicked.
Oof!” he gasped. I flipped out of the trunk and drew my dagger. He backed up. “State your mind, boy!” he growled. There was a different look in his eyes. Could it be respect? Why would anyone respect anyone that just kicked them? Why I probably had just destroyed any chance of ever getting Alia now.
I have come to ask for the hand of Lady Alia in marriage!” I blurted out. I was surprised at myself. His eyes narrowed.
Name your choice of challenge.” he said, “You have to convince me that you are worthy of her!” I was surprised. I had expected him to kill me for asking. But what kind of challenge could I be impressive?
Story telling.” I said, “I will tell the greatest story you ever heard!” What a way to be unimpressive and braggy in one breath.
A story you never told before!” he barked.
You mean I have to find a new one?” I gasped in dismay. It took many retellings in public of new stories to get them told proper like and just right.
You have one day to collect information.” Alark said coldly, “Good day!” he walked off, leaving me fuming.

Gray Time Day 29
Thank the Heavens! The trunk moved. But it brought be to Greengrove Island. What can a bunch of reclusive men and boys share with me. But I swear I shall pick up one tidbit for my new story. I must get the trunk to fly in day time or I will be doomed. Three boys in robes confronted me.
I am Munk.” one of them said in the common tongue, “My brothers are Pel and Fry.” they bowed.
Hello boys!” I responded, “I am Yaron the story master!” the boys exchanged looks, and a grin passed through them. I felt the first inklings of suspicions. What were these louts up too? They looked like school dropouts.
We have a story for you.” Munk said at last. I felt relieved.
Well I desire to hear it.” I said quickly.
Tis about thee ghost in the rock well.” Fry whispered dramatically.
Excuse me?” I said.
Tis a wondrous chilling story.” Munk said. I thought it would be wonderful to add some spine gripping moments into my story. If I could get the audience to laugh, weep and hold there breath it would be a good story.
So what is this ghost story about?” I asked.
Tisn't a story to tell, but to see.” Munk said. He glanced at his friends.
I believe Brother Farnal is calling me, I must be off.” he ran off.
You take him Pel.” Fry said. But Pel was already running after Munk. I glanced at Fry. He was shivering. “Come along then.” he muttered, “I will show you the well, but not stay.” I wondered what was so frightening about showing me this story.

Fry brought me down a path that got narrower and more overgrown with every step I took. I decided that there would be three brothers in my story, who would set off on an adventure. Adventure involving a haunted well. I would brutally kill all three of the brothers. It was a small way to revenge myself on the scratches and stubbed toes that Fry had so kindly provided for me, but it would have to do. As my story began to form in my mind I began to feel better. It works wonders for angry people to put their enemies in their stories and brutally murder them. It stops real murders from happening. Presently we came to a thick patch of trees. In the center of a ring of sparsely branched firs was an old stone well. The wooden roof was cracked. A broken bucket hung off of the wheel. Fry stopped and handed me a candle.
We would be obliged if you would get rid of the ghost.” he whispered.
Certainly, what do you want me to do?” I asked, “Throw a spear down into the well or chuck rocks in until he comes out?”
It might be easier if you climbed down into the well yourself.” Fry mumbled.
Climb down?” I yelled. But Fry was already running of as fast as he could, his long robe flapping around his legs.

“Note to self.” I muttered, “The two brothers of hero flee, and an ogre kills them. The hero gets chopped to bits and eaten by the ghost.” Feeling better, I lit the candle and approached the well. The flame seemed small and faint even under the shadows of the tree. The well was covered cobwebs and broken nutshells and pine needles. “Um- hello?” I called as I looked down into the gloom. The only answer was an echo. I pile of nutshells lay on the rim, so I pushed them down and listened. There was no sound, not even a splash. I wedged the candle between two lose stones, then I picked up the broken bucket and lowered it into the well. It lowered slowly and creakily. Then I took a deep breath, and stepped on top of it. The wheel creaked and louder and began to turn a little faster. Good thing it was so old that my weight was barely sufficient to keep it turning slowly. I grabbed the candle and descended into the darkness. Ten feet and my flame seemed to grow brighter. Twenty feet and no water. Thirty feet, the bucket began to drop faster. Forty feet, the bucket stopped suddenly, leaving me hanging stupidly. I crouched and peered around. A few feet below me, I could see what could only be ground. Slowly I got off the bucket. The ground was soft and muddy around my feet. Water oozed and bubbled all about. “Gross!” I muttered.

Suddenly there was a scuffling from far above me and the bucket began to dance. I barely had time to drop the candle and fling my hands above my head when something heavy dropped on top of me. I fell backwards, struck my head and knew no more.

I awoke seconds later to a painful burning sensation. I was covered in flour and my candle had started the sack on fire. A fire that was licking at my clothes. I scrambled to my feet and grabbed at the bucket.
Ouch! OW!” I yelled. I started climbing the rope. My hair and clothes were smoking. The bucket burst into flames. I continued up hand over hand. The smoke and fire followed me. I ignored the pain the rough rope inflicted on the palms of my hands. I was nearly brained by a clay jar of water flying past my head.
You morons!” I yelled, as I kept climbing, “Don't you know you could injure someone seriously?” I heard some wild yells, then silence. I reached the top of the rope, with fire licking at my boots. I ejected out of the well, plowed through a group of staring men and ran for the Divide. Nothing felt better then the cold water on my burnt skin. Later I learned the story behind the flour. The men of Greengrove were accustomed to throwing things into the well to appease the ghost. I doubt that the ghost appreciated these gifts anymore then I did. But at least I got fair treatment, in exchange for my pain. Now if only I had a story.

To Be Continued

Saturday, July 7, 2018

Character Interview: Caleb Dagonet

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I used to make a handwritten newspaper for my family, which I haven't done in a long, and one of the things I had in it, were character interviews. I decided to start posting one weekly. I certainly have enough characters. :D

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My first character Interview will be with Caleb Dagonet.


Interview

Me: Good morning Caleb, would you mind sharing a few words with me?
Caleb: *Terrified look* N-no p-please!
Me: Thank you.
Caleb: Uh-?
Me: Do you have any siblings, Caleb?
Caleb: *Smiles* Yes.
Me: How many?
Caleb: Er- nine.
Me: I beat you, I have eleven.
Caleb: *deflated* Oh.
Me: How many brothers do you have?
Caleb: *Nervously* Um- Calvin, Reginald, Percy, Jamie and Willy.
Me: *eyes glaze over* Um- that's six, no um five. *This is math people, don't expect me to do it*
Caleb: I- I guess, I never counted them.
Me: *brightens up* Isn't Math awful?
Caleb: Wh-what's math?
Me: You don't want to know.
Caleb: Um- alright.
Me: So what did you do before becoming one of the Knights Round?
Caleb: Took care of my brothers and sisters.
Me: What were your parents doing?
Caleb: My da was blacksmith. My mother is dead.
Me: Oh, I'm sorry.
Caleb: *unhappily* If you were you- you would not have murdered her!
Me: But I didn't murder her! She was dead before I even wrote the first book!
Caleb: *Sniffling* See you murdered her!
Me: *unhappily* Now you're making me feel bad. Don't you like your new mother.
Caleb: *Angrily* Madame Velna hates me!
Me: *Thoughtfully* Yeah, she doesn't like many people, does she.
Caleb: She's mean to the little ones.
Me: How old are you now, Caleb?
Caleb: Fourteen I guess, you weren't very particular about my age.
Me: I got it, you were twelve in "Sword of Camelot," thirteen in "The Pendragon Heir," and fourteen in "Key of Avalon."
Caleb: I have to wait a whole year for you to write another book for me to get any older?
Me: I don't believe you ever said anything that long in any of the books!
Caleb: Well?
Me: Ordinary people have to wait a hole year to get older.
Caleb: You still did kill my mother.
Me: Okay, this whole thing was a bad idea. All my characters are going to do is complain about how poorly I've treated them.
Caleb: Are you going to kill me too?
Me: Well you were alive in "A Ranger's Quest," so you do survive for at least eighteen more years.
Caleb: Oh good.
Me: But Arthur survives that long and he is still on the dying list.
Caleb: :(



God Bless You all,
~E